Friday, 30 May 2014

The Frost

             The Frost

When I opened my door I felt super cold and when I looked at the grass it was all frosted it looked like it had snowed overnight and when I stepped over it it felt like spikes were poking into my shoes. Then me and my brother walked to school as soon as I hung up my bag I ran to the backfield Kiana, Hone, Jazzinda and her sisters. Me and Kiana dared Hone to do a snow angel in the frost. After a while I did one it felt super freezing after I did it. The frost is very cool and want to do it again.

For Writing my class had to write a story about the frost. I think I was good at the describing the frost. But next time I think I could add more adjectives.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             

1 comment:

  1. Wow Daniel that was an awesome story you have there about your frost that you seen. Your` image is so fantastic it looks just like a tree covered in ice.